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Typos / Errors

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2024 10:48 am
by CommanderTso
p180, under Amplification, end of first paragraph - Sentence ending in "description" is missing a period

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2024 12:05 am
by CommanderTso
p167, under Casting Spells - "the spell will have a drain code that uses the force of the spell to calculate damage damage."

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2024 1:27 am
by CommanderTso
p150 - "Each additional target removes 2 incriminating successes instead of 1", assuming "incriminating" is a typo.

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Tue May 07, 2024 4:00 am
by Ghostmarmot
p12 "slightly less than 3 billion" should be "slightly fewer then 3 billion" (debatable)
p13 "killing over half a megadeath of people and leaving *Seattle to the sea*." is Seattle on the sea now? Like Olympic Nation Forest is gone?
p12-14 I suspect the green should be the Green
p15 "Sea level rise begins to stabilize at almost 3 meters." there should be some mention of + or higher (nitpicking)
p20 "What did matter, is he could solve it." should be "What did matter was he could solve it."
p21 "...called himself Beowulf. Perhaps." Perhaps what?
p29 on page 28 it's spelled Foofaraw twice, then is spelled Froofrara in the example on p29

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Tue May 07, 2024 1:28 pm
by Agonarchartist
All of those are great suggestions! Thanks!

Seattle is underwater. I have unreleased stuff, including a map, and it's just ocean there. Yes. Gone. Most of the west coast is underwater or island chains.

P15: I thought the heavy lifting was being done by the word 'rise'
p20: Should it? (I mean, it's fiction. There's a rhythm concern ///U/uu/ versus yours /uuu/uu/? no?
p21: Yeah. Good question.
It should be Foofaraw, but that's hard to remember when typing. It's the start of the gibberish text written in the shadowrun 6e rulebook. It's just a typo. It should be Foofaraw.

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Wed May 08, 2024 1:22 am
by Ghostmarmot
P45 Active Skills section. "assigning skills to priority A gives your character 36 points..." but the table on p44 says the value for B is 36

I also was looking at the Asset table and Serpent Pliskin? Can you surf Wilshire Canyon? (Sorry, couldn't help it!)

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Wed May 08, 2024 5:13 am
by Agonarchartist
Indeed that is an error on page 45. Would you believe the values changed several times in playtesting

Man, Escape from LA is, I dunno. he won't even talk about it now.

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Wed May 08, 2024 11:08 pm
by Ghostmarmot
Agonarchartist wrote: Wed May 08, 2024 5:13 am Indeed that is an error on page 45. Would you believe the values changed several times in playtesting
Yay! Playtesting causing changes is GREAT to hear!

And he did help write it and it was a major flop, so maybe that's it, but I loved Escape from New York when I was younger. But it's been years since I've seen the Escapes and should rewatch them soon. I do have to say, I was hoping for a Buckaroo Banzai reference, too.

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Thu May 09, 2024 5:25 am
by Agonarchartist
No, I think it was a studio thing. he got real angry or something.

https://twitter.com/JFrankensteiner/sta ... 4499306497

Re: Typos / Errors

Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2024 12:50 am
by Agonarchartist
Make it more clear that foci/et. al. have weight.
Make it more clear the formulas for calculating pools, do not hide them.