Typos / Errors

[CommanderTso]

p180, under Amplification, end of first paragraph - Sentence ending in "description" is missing a period

[CommanderTso]

p167, under Casting Spells - "the spell will have a drain code that uses the force of the spell to calculate damage damage."

[CommanderTso]

p150 - "Each additional target removes 2 incriminating successes instead of 1", assuming "incriminating" is a typo.

[Ghostmarmot]

p12 "slightly less than 3 billion" should be "slightly fewer then 3 billion" (debatable)
p13 "killing over half a megadeath of people and leaving *Seattle to the sea*." is Seattle on the sea now? Like Olympic Nation Forest is gone?
p12-14 I suspect the green should be the Green
p15 "Sea level rise begins to stabilize at almost 3 meters." there should be some mention of + or higher (nitpicking)
p20 "What did matter, is he could solve it." should be "What did matter was he could solve it."
p21 "...called himself Beowulf. Perhaps." Perhaps what?
p29 on page 28 it's spelled Foofaraw twice, then is spelled Froofrara in the example on p29

[Agonarchartist]

All of those are great suggestions! Thanks!

Seattle is underwater. I have unreleased stuff, including a map, and it's just ocean there. Yes. Gone. Most of the west coast is underwater or island chains.

P15: I thought the heavy lifting was being done by the word 'rise'
p20: Should it? (I mean, it's fiction. There's a rhythm concern ///U/uu/ versus yours /uuu/uu/? no?
p21: Yeah. Good question.
It should be Foofaraw, but that's hard to remember when typing. It's the start of the gibberish text written in the shadowrun 6e rulebook. It's just a typo. It should be Foofaraw.

[Ghostmarmot]

P45 Active Skills section. "assigning skills to priority A gives your character 36 points..." but the table on p44 says the value for B is 36

I also was looking at the Asset table and Serpent Pliskin? Can you surf Wilshire Canyon? (Sorry, couldn't help it!)

[Agonarchartist]

Indeed that is an error on page 45. Would you believe the values changed several times in playtesting

Man, Escape from LA is, I dunno. he won't even talk about it now.

[Ghostmarmot]

Indeed that is an error on page 45. Would you believe the values changed several times in playtesting

Yay! Playtesting causing changes is GREAT to hear!

And he did help write it and it was a major flop, so maybe that's it, but I loved Escape from New York when I was younger. But it's been years since I've seen the Escapes and should rewatch them soon. I do have to say, I was hoping for a Buckaroo Banzai reference, too.

[Agonarchartist]

No, I think it was a studio thing. he got real angry or something.

https://twitter.com/JFrankensteiner/sta ... 4499306497

[Agonarchartist]

Make it more clear that foci/et. al. have weight.
Make it more clear the formulas for calculating pools, do not hide them.